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نَنجَحُ في بعض الأحيان
أن نَبني وَطَناً
في داخِلِنا.. لِلأوطانْ.
وَنُسِرُّ لَها:
(نامِي فِينا
يَنفيكِ بِنا مَن يَنفينا.
لَن يَنتزعِوا حُبَّك مِنّا
مَهْما كانْ).
قَد نُخفِقُ أحياناً..
لكنْ
نَنجحُ في بَعضِ الأحيانْ

(أحمد مطر)



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matout from Jordan
July, 08, 2006 12:35 PM
Good Poem. but i agree and Don't agree.

I agree That we can build a Homeland inside us. ALWAYS we can. Not Sometimes.

But Yes we might fail when turning this Homeland, this dream into reality. we fail to make it come true. But this will just happened if we start working in our hearts not minds.

Don't you Agree, we all Thinking By Hearts. Not Brains

Mahmoud Has Left the Building
Ola from Jordan
July, 08, 2006 12:50 PM
You know when I read this I thought: We can always do that! but when I thought more about it, I was like: Sometimes we do fail, but it's not necessarily a permanent failure. We could get busy with our life, forget it for a moment, it's shameful to admit that but it happens... The point is: we cna always come back becasuse our homeland is way more generous and tolerant than we are!
matout from Jordan
July, 08, 2006 1:49 PM
Ola. What we need to do. it what every body in History Did.

Please Go to this link and see what i mean.

Thank you

http://www.adab.com/modules.php?name=Sh3er&doWhat=shqas&qid=10712
Neverland from Jordan
July, 08, 2006 1:55 PM
Just dropped by to say hi , how are you girl :)
Ola from Jordan
July, 08, 2006 2:06 PM
Matout: I will check the link later in sha'a Allah and try to grasp what you mena exactly... Something to ponder!

Neverland: ahlan w sahlan! nawwar wel blog :D